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So I've been working hard on Fleeting Dragons, which ties into my Great Fox comics (I'll have something to show for it sometime this year, I swear), and dwelling on a dilemma that's been sitting on a shelf in my mind for several years, now:
Is it possible to write a good Mary Sue?
The forthright answer seems to be a glaring no--it's a contradiction in terms. By its nature, a Mary Sue is an original character gone horribly wrong, and the best way to write one well is not to write one at all. I can't think of a single original character in any fanfic that I could positively identify as a self-insert/Sue and simultaneously not hate to death--but was that because of the principle behind the character's creation, or the way the character was integrated into the story?
It doesn't take a long shot to guess that I'm thinking of Mishu/Myshu, who has been a major character of my Phoenix Chronicles from the start, and from whom I derived my online handle--because I was fifteen and thought she was cool. Isn't that how all Sues get started?
So the question hasn't been whether or not Myshu is a Mary Sue; there's no point deluding oneself (she bombed the litmus test at the very first question.) The question for me has been whether or not to keep her--whether or not her very presence would compromise the integrity (haha) of the plot and drive away anyone who might otherwise be interested in a somewhat decent adventure story.
When I went into (re)writing Dr. LEA's Diary this year, I seriously considered writing her out entirely. While that could have been accomplished with minimal damage, I felt like that would be removing the most tangible link between that story (and consequently, the cast of CT) and Fleeting Dragons, not to mention the core quest of the series: the search for the Phoenix.
It would entail rewriting the entire series with a new set of motives for half the characters, finding another character to provide the impetus for their quest (and who's going to have both the position and the give-a-damn factor? ...Magus??) and finding a different way to relate the reader to one of the major races/antagonists. It wouldn't be easy, but it's not impossible, and can probably be done with favorable results.
But do I WANT to? Do I want to throw away a character I've been working with for ten years? Is it truly impossible to write her in a way that is both interesting and supports the story--or at the very least isn't a terminal brainsore?
...Hmm.
Is it possible to write a good Mary Sue?
The forthright answer seems to be a glaring no--it's a contradiction in terms. By its nature, a Mary Sue is an original character gone horribly wrong, and the best way to write one well is not to write one at all. I can't think of a single original character in any fanfic that I could positively identify as a self-insert/Sue and simultaneously not hate to death--but was that because of the principle behind the character's creation, or the way the character was integrated into the story?
It doesn't take a long shot to guess that I'm thinking of Mishu/Myshu, who has been a major character of my Phoenix Chronicles from the start, and from whom I derived my online handle--because I was fifteen and thought she was cool. Isn't that how all Sues get started?
So the question hasn't been whether or not Myshu is a Mary Sue; there's no point deluding oneself (she bombed the litmus test at the very first question.) The question for me has been whether or not to keep her--whether or not her very presence would compromise the integrity (haha) of the plot and drive away anyone who might otherwise be interested in a somewhat decent adventure story.
When I went into (re)writing Dr. LEA's Diary this year, I seriously considered writing her out entirely. While that could have been accomplished with minimal damage, I felt like that would be removing the most tangible link between that story (and consequently, the cast of CT) and Fleeting Dragons, not to mention the core quest of the series: the search for the Phoenix.
It would entail rewriting the entire series with a new set of motives for half the characters, finding another character to provide the impetus for their quest (and who's going to have both the position and the give-a-damn factor? ...Magus??) and finding a different way to relate the reader to one of the major races/antagonists. It wouldn't be easy, but it's not impossible, and can probably be done with favorable results.
But do I WANT to? Do I want to throw away a character I've been working with for ten years? Is it truly impossible to write her in a way that is both interesting and supports the story--or at the very least isn't a terminal brainsore?
...Hmm.
Priorities
Far past time for a new journal, eh?
Going to be brief. Some amazing things happening in my life, and my art. Won't go into details for assorted reasons, but the long and short of it is that I had to sit down and sort out which projects really matter to me, and which ones I had to let go--because life's too short to have time for everything. So, here's the run-down:
MY FICS: discontinued. All of them. I know some authors like to get fancy and call it an "indefinite hiatus," but let me not kid myself. I'm very happy with what I managed to finish, and I'll always consider my time writing fanfiction well-spent. As for the people I'm watching
GRYFFINDOR?
Time to make a proper journal entry before November's out. I hope everyone's holidays are going well!
Creatively speaking: New ideas. Not nervous, but strange anxiety. Can't sleep well. Haven't slept right in months. Can't escape the feeling of not having enough time. Can't talk about new project. Wish I had more room in my life to work on the old ones. Something's gotta give. Hopefully not my grammar.
Going to do one damn cool thing before my time's up, I swear.
I'd talk more about my personal life but, eh... boring, that.
So here's another meme ganked from Nyaasu (https://www.deviantart.com/nyaasu)
HAIRY POTTAH TYME
GRYFFINDOR:
[x] Youve never done illegal d
So crazy it's stupid
Brought to you by ANONYMOUS FRIEND: Final Fantasy humor. Oh yeah.
SPOILER ALERT, duh.
(This is all we do in chat, I swear.)
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friend: If we're going 1-10 Rinoa's stats are 4 Crazy 8 Stupid
friend: She has to be at least a little crazy because of her retarded plots, rebelliousness, finger waggling, and dog affinity
friend: Quistis is about 7 Crazy 3 Stupid
friend: Zell, 1 Crazy 8 Stupid
friend: Squall 4 Crazy 2 Stupid
friend: Selphie 9 Crazy 1 Stupid
friend: Irvine 1 Crazy, 3 Stupid
me: Geez that makes Selphie like an aspy or something
friend: She is, man
friend: She flies the Ragnarok like with no training
friend: And who but
Beer Bottle Tree
Thanks to everyone who wished me happy birthday! (And to the power of DevArt reminders, I suppose.) Y'all are cool people.
I had a good time and scored some nice loot from the family. My grandparents took me to Trade Days, which is pretty much an oversized flea market, only more redneck-y since this is Texas. Worth the trip just for the sights and smells.
Highlights:
- A stack of old Disney VHS movies for $1 a pop
- Finding a 2' tall Chewbacca doll next to an ewok doll, next to a full-head rubber Batman mask
- A 15' mountain of old iron-spoked wheels
- A sixty-year-old hardback copy of Robinson Crusoe with a creepy old black-and-white p
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Wow. What a question. I actually didn't know what a Mary Sue was until a few years ago when SI's became the main bulk of fanfiction writing. Correct me if I'm wrong, but it's basically a 'perfect' character, right? Like, strongest, fastest, prettiest, smartest.
I have yet to encounter Myshu, but, to be quite honest, I don't think it's possible for a writer like you to write a Mary Sue. I mean, you are undoubtedly up there on the list of supreme fanfic/online writers, and I'm not even saying that to boost your ego. It's just a fact. What it sounds like to me, is that you're edging toward overthinking the whole thing. And, tbh, I don't think you want to write her out at all.
What I'm saying is: You're great, so don't worry about it. If you're unhappy with it all still, don't write her out, just rethink her personality a bit.
I have these character profile sheets, if you want me to send a blank one over? I'm sure you've already done somehting akin to it, but they often make you think twice about your OC's personalities. No worries if you don't want one
(I think I accidentally clicked a 'neutral' emotion - I didn't mean too! I can't undo it.)
I have yet to encounter Myshu, but, to be quite honest, I don't think it's possible for a writer like you to write a Mary Sue. I mean, you are undoubtedly up there on the list of supreme fanfic/online writers, and I'm not even saying that to boost your ego. It's just a fact. What it sounds like to me, is that you're edging toward overthinking the whole thing. And, tbh, I don't think you want to write her out at all.
What I'm saying is: You're great, so don't worry about it. If you're unhappy with it all still, don't write her out, just rethink her personality a bit.
I have these character profile sheets, if you want me to send a blank one over? I'm sure you've already done somehting akin to it, but they often make you think twice about your OC's personalities. No worries if you don't want one
(I think I accidentally clicked a 'neutral' emotion - I didn't mean too! I can't undo it.)